While reading the blog of another, I thought of the difference between writing about something in brief and writing about something to help develop the Character of the protagonists. Something as small as a tiff about getting dressed in the morning for a job interview might show the differences in views and ideas of each person involved. Though I have not fully decided on how the argument will be staged, the idea itself seems promising, since readers will need to know Cindy and May before revisiting the Castle. This way I figure the reader will have his or her own idea of what might come to pass in certain events that occur in the Castle.
Though I am not yet past the third chapter, I have yet another idea, a fight between the sisters which spans a chapter or so. With an air of conflict between the two, they would be accepted by the Head Maid/Mistress easier. Then, when they make up and begin to behave around each other again, the Head Maid would then begin to cause them trouble to make them slip up in their work for an excuse to fire them. With this in mind, the main conflict of the story between the Protagonists and the Antagonist will escalate, becoming the central focus of the story.
I have a feeling that with this new pace, things might be looking up for me! (I now have enough material for a few chapters! But no promises.)
C. Olson
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