"Ahhh..."

I just finished up with my second chapter. Earlier this year I had written a rough of my first two chapters, but I grew dissatisfied with what I had written, so I have been remaking what I had for a while. Now, finally I have wrapped up my story's first two chapters, though I was compelled to include a rather 'ify' scene between the girls as they searched for a job. Heh, I wish I could have fit another scene in place of that, but I do not think there is anything else that would have fit as well.
The scene in question is mainly about a strong misunderstanding between the two women, which in the end reveals a small bit of info concerning the desires of the younger sister. Its a funny scene, despite that it is a tad distasteful.